Sunday, October 10, 2010

The Love Story

FIRST LOVE



“Here he comes!” Jin Ae who had a crush on Jung Su was standing in the middle of the hallway in Korean International High School. She gave her hands out while holding a letter and gave it to Jung Su. Jung Su was a genius boy, who had the highest number of IQ in the school. He always had been on the top 10 list of the school. He had stolen away lots of the girls’ heart in school. There was the only one reason that Jin Ae afraid of Jung Su was she totally opposite him. She couldn’t understand what the teachers tried to teach her. Her class had always on the last list of the school. She gave it to him, and he accepted it without saying a word. Jung Su didn’t know who Jin Ae was, so he couldn’t reply the letter. Her best friend was trying to make Jun Su notice Jin Ae by kept calling her name. Jung Su noticed that in the letter it said Jin Ae, so he turned back and came toward her. Jin Ae was both scared and excited, because she couldn’t wait for his answer.
“I don’t like people who are stupid like you, and by the way, you spelled some words wrong.” Jung Su said while gave back the letter to her. Jin Ae was embarrassed in front of the whole school, but she didn’t cry.
            On that day, Jin Ae moved to her new house, so her friends came and helped her. Unfortunately, on the same day there was a small earthquake. Her house was the only house that fallen down into pieces. She had to pack all her things again, but didn’t know where to go. Her dad’s best friend saw Jin Ae and his dad on TV, his best friend called her dad. She didn’t know that her dad’s best friend’s son was Jung Su, who she had a crush on.
            Jin Ae and her dad came over. Her dad’s best friend welcomed them. They helped them packed the entire thing, but her dad refused.
“Yah let me help you. It looks like it really heavy.” Her dad’s best friend said.
“No, it’s ok! I can do it. Thanks for letting us stay here.” Her dad replied. They had one son, and he also came and helped. Jung Su was her dad’s best friend’s son. He came and asked Jin Ae,
“Do you need help?”
“No, thank you, I can do it by myself.” Jin Ae answered, without noticed Jung Su. She turned back and saw Jung Su behind her. She was shocked and asked him what he was doing here. He told her that was his house. Jung Su said that he was unlucky since he met her. He also told her that she couldn’t tell her friends where she lived now. Jin Ae said she understood him, and promised she won’t tell anyone.
            Jung Su’s mom really liked Jin Ae; she tried to make them fell in love with each other. One day, his mom came to Jin Ae’s room and talked to her. She asked Jin Ae if she had her pictures when she was little. Jin Ae said yes and showed it to her. Then Jung Su’s mom told her she had something to showed Jin Ae, and pulled out the pictures of Jung Su when he was little with girl clothes on him. Jin Ae took one of the pictures, and showed to Jung Su the next day in school. Jung Su asked her to give it back, but Jin Ae said she had one condition. He asked what it is, and she told him that he had to tutor her at home if he wanted the picture back. He agreed. Every night, Jung Su came over to Jin Ae’s room, and helped her with studying. Jung Su was tired, so he slept while teaching her. Jin Ae said thank you to him because he had helped her a lot. That she even jumped from the last list in school to the top 50 students in school. But Jung Su didn’t know she said thank you. After Jin Ae finished her homework, she fell asleep next to Jung Su. Jung Su woke up, and saw Jin Ae was sleeping; he took a blanket and covered her. Then he kissed her on the cheek. He didn’t know that her mom was standing there took some pictures.
“Hehehe, he kissed her! I’m so proud of him” She was talking to herself, then she left the room. Then Jun Su stood up and went back to his room. His mom came into Jin Ae’s room again, and put one picture inside the book.
The next day in school, Jin Ae was reading the book, and the picture dropped on the floor. One of her friend saw the picture, came toward and picked it up. She showed everyone in the class, and even posted it on the internet. Jin Ae didn’t know anything, and she was too embarrassed that she couldn’t stand still. Jung Su also heard the rumor, and ran to Jin Ae’s classroom. He asked Jin Ae if she spread the rumor, she said she didn’t know anything. Jung Su didn’t believe her and walked away. At night, Jung Su heard Jin Ae talking to her best friend on the phone about the rumor. He found out that she didn’t lie to him. He came to her room, and said sorry to her. She asked him why didn’t he believe her, but he didn’t answer. Still, she accepted the sorry. At that time, her feeling for Jung Su had gone because he didn’t believe what she said. Then how could she like him? That was the question that Jin Ae had asked herself. Jin Ae didn’t realize that Jung Su liked her, because he never showed it.
In the next morning, Jung Su’s mom told him to take Jin Ae somewhere and hangout. He agreed, but Jin Ae refused. Still, Jung Su made Jin Ae to go. They had fun together. At the end of the day, Jung Su kissed her, and so Jin Ae realized that he liked her. Her feeling for Jung Su had come back.                                                       
THE END

1 comment:

  1. Nice story, Tina. It's very romantic and I almost expect for the guy to fall in love with the girl when she gave him the love letter, but he didn't. :))

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